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6月17日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 再次犯罪的原因及解決方法

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摘要：6月17日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 再次犯罪的原因及解決方法

6月17日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 再次犯罪的原因及解決方法

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2023年6月20日雅思大作文題目
Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem? (2023/06/17)

范文及解析
Introduction
A mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime , exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.

解析
本場考試重復1月14日大作文考題，雖然是很多考生害怕的犯罪類話題，但本題以說明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被釋放出之后繼續犯罪的原因及解決方法，是一個復古舊題，整體難度并不大；
◇mushrooming adj.迅速增長的；越來越多的；
◇ceaseless adj.不斷的；不停的；
◇baneful adj.不好的；有害的；
◇ticklish adj.難對付的；棘手的；

Body 1
The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causes for anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embarkon a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.

解析
再次犯罪的原因有：
(1)物質層面：犯過罪的人出來之后在穩定生活重新融入社會上存在明顯困難；
(2)精神層面：報復心理；

◇culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁禍首；
◇reintegrate into v.重新融入；
◇living odds n.生活窘境；
◇embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；
◇larceny n.盜竊；
◇verbal aggression n.語言攻擊；
◇be inundated with v.充斥著；
◇resentment n. 憤恨；怨恨；
◇revenge n.復仇；
◇are apt to v.傾向于；易于；
◇perpetrate v.犯罪；作惡；

Body 2
Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders to accomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe a reformed man deserves a new leaf.

解析
解決方法：
(1)政府層面：頒布更嚴格的法律配備更嚴厲的處罰以達到更好的震懾作用；進一步改進監禁的教育方式從而達到幫助犯罪分子真正改過自新；
(2)家庭和社會：更多地尊重，接納，包容改過自新的罪犯；

◇prickly adj.麻煩的；
◇address v.解決；
◇enact v.制定；頒布法令；
◇rehabilitation n.改過自新；
◇staunchly adv.強烈地；
◇be furnished with v.具有；配備有；
◇solicitude n.安慰；關懷
◇reformed adj.改過自新的；

Conclusion
In conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.

解析
總結前文：
◇notwithstanding prep. 雖然；盡管；
◇gravity n.嚴重性;

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