支招小作文(149) | 混合數(shù)據(jù)圖 澳大利亞的醫(yī)生數(shù)量
2024/3/16 16:18:10來(lái)源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:支招小作文(149) | 混合數(shù)據(jù)圖 澳大利亞的醫(yī)生數(shù)量
支招小作文(149) | 混合數(shù)據(jù)圖 澳大利亞的醫(yī)生數(shù)量
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[2023/ 7/ 1] The table and charts below show the number of doctors and percentages of different groups of doctors in Australia from 1986 to 2006.
【主體段分段】:表格和第一個(gè)柱圖信息交叉,可以合并
Body 1:表+柱圖1
Body 2:第2個(gè)柱圖
【開(kāi)頭段】
The table and bar charts present the number of doctors in Australia and changes in the proportions of domestic and overseas doctors in this country between 1986 and 2006.
【概述段】
Overall, the given period witnessed a rising trend in the total number of doctors. Also, 2006 was the year when the gender difference and the gap between local and non-local doctors were the smallest.
思路要點(diǎn):
- 總?cè)藬?shù)上升
- 2006年男女&本國(guó)、外國(guó)醫(yī)生的人數(shù)差距--都最低
【Body 1】
We can see that there emerged a marginal rise in the total number of doctors from 27000 in 1986 to 29000 in 1996, followed by a remarkable growth to its highest point at 35000 in 2006. Among them, the percentage of male doctors saw a noticeable decline from 70% to 45%. However, although only 30% of the doctors were females in the beginning, this figure nearly doubled and overtook the figure for their male counterparts in the final year.
**語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
- 關(guān)聯(lián)性表達(dá)
- 交點(diǎn)描述
思路要點(diǎn):
- 總?cè)藬?shù)小幅度上升→急劇上升
- males:顯著下降
- females:一開(kāi)始30%,2006年幾乎翻倍,超過(guò)males
【Body 2】
It is also clear that originally, almost 98% of the doctors were from Australia, but the following years underwent a significant drop in this figure by roughly 50% in 2006. Oppositely, although there were merely 2% of non-local doctors in the initial year, a jump could be found to the same figure as that for domestic doctors in the last year.
思路要點(diǎn):
- local:第一年98%→顯著下降
- overseas:第一年2%→劇烈增長(zhǎng)→2006年達(dá)到和local相同數(shù)值(交點(diǎn))