2021/6/23 13:37:38來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:上海新航道托福培訓小編特別整理了托福考試的詳情,這次給大家帶來了寫的關于2021年6月19日托福獨立寫作范文及解析。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題,充分備考,爭取理想成績,實現留學夢想。
上海新航道托福培訓小編特別整理了托福考試的詳情,這次給大家帶來了寫的關于2021年6月19日托福獨立寫作范文及解析。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題,充分備考,爭取理想成績,實現留學夢想。
2021年6月19日托福獨立寫作題目:了解決問題,就必須了解歷史嗎?
Do you agree or disagree?
In order to solve the problems of the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past.
看到這題,大家是不是條件反射想到了 “以史為鑒, xxxx ” 這句話,問題是怎么翻譯呢?
Take history as a mirror
Draw lessons from history
If history is a guide
范文參考及解析:
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If we cannot understand our past, how can we understand our present or glimpse our future? In other words, by learning from what came before, we know how past mistakes and breakthroughs were made, and this is crucial important in addressing problems of the present and future.
段落解析:
開頭段第一句話用反問句寫(if xxx, how can we do sth? ),助于開門見山直接擺明立場。但是很明顯題目問到的是解決問題,而這句話并沒有 “直接”提到解決方法,于是我們還有話沒說完,所以接上 “ in other words” 做出進一步的回應,同時預告下文分論點。
Glimpse v. 瞥一眼; 開始領悟到
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Learning past events matters because without a thorough consideration about what took us on a detour before, we truly have no idea how to avoid them, nor can we go onto the correct path. And without probinginto past sequences of cause and effect, it is well-nigh impossible to develop intelligent plans for the future. (題干中出現了解決過去“和”現在的問題,那么不妨選擇兩個并列的Without,來分別扣題) This can be exemplified by the story of Thomas Alva Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb. Instead of experimenting blindly, he recorded each mistake he made so as to identify the factors behind those failures like improper material selection. With previous mistakes avoided, he saved time and energy in repeating those mistakes, which also contributed insights into his new experiment plans. As a result, the problems, the obstacles to his inventions, were removed. (段落的點題句可以寫個強調句)At this point, it is quite clear that it is the past experience in addition to the study of it that leads to the solutions of present and future problems.
詞匯積累:
Probe 探究,盤問
Well-nigh adj. 幾乎,差不多,可謂
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It is admitted that looking back the past may backfire. When doing it, we are prone to getting stuck in it, which undermines our innovative abilities. It is certainly not conducive in approaching the problems of the present and future. (當發現轉折很難時,不妨將讓步部分觀點代入一種特定的情況下討論,說其在特定的情況下其實是不成立的) However, under certain circumstances, always yearning for freshness of ideas may not necessarily prove advantageous. (舉例信號詞)This is the case where a crisis entailing immediate responses like fire or epidemic erupts. If it were not for past experience of coping with such crises, quick responses would be guaranteed, and the losses would be greater as a result. It thus follows that in such situations, trying to innovate a new approach, which is too time-consuming, is hardly comparable with adopting the previous measures.
詞匯積累:
Yearn for v. 渴望,追求
Backfire v. 產生事與愿違的后果
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In conclusion, a backwards-looking viewpoint reveals the vistas of the past events, enabling us to solve problems of the present and past with a full understanding of complex factors.
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