2018/11/14 11:14:27來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:為了幫助各位備考托福同學們更好的熟悉最新托福寫作題目內容,今天,上海新航道托福培訓小編給大家帶來了關于11月10日托福獨立寫作真題范文-朋友之間的競爭會影響友情嗎?。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題,充分備考,爭取理想成績,實現留學夢想。
為了幫助各位備考托福同學們更好的熟悉最新托福寫作題目內容,今天,上海新航道托福培訓小編給大家帶來了關于11月10日托福獨立寫作真題范文-朋友之間的競爭會影響友情嗎?。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題,充分備考,爭取理想成績,實現留學夢想。
題目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Competition among friends usually has a negative impact on friendship.
寫作范文
【立場:Disagree】
Introduction
Competition is thought to inhibit the development of a friendship. This idea is not unreasonable. There are cases where friends split up because one wins and the other loses. 【在introduction處讓步后轉折,文章的主體部分就不需要再讓步了,僅“讓小小一步”也是一種可以接受的行文邏輯的設計】 However, despite the many break-ups, I remain optimistic.
Reason 1:“無聊/陳詞濫調”的理由,就不展開來說太多太久。
When a person believes that competition is favorable to a friendship, the immediate idea is that competition enables two individuals to better know each other. To win a contest, one must study the other—his or her character and personality. As a result, mutual understanding, which may be in-depth as the study goes on, will develop, laying a firm foundation for the friendship.
Reason 2
Without denying the aforementioned reason, we should find reasons that matter more. 【承上啟下】 First, competition tests a friendship. In other words, whether a friendship is authentic is not certain unless the relationship goes through the competition between two people. It is only if a person, either winning or losing, respect rather than despising the other or being green with envy that the friendship is true. For example, a friend of mine always achieve higher academically than I do. However, never do I for this reason feel disgruntled, and he never looks down upon me. Instead, thanks to the numerous competitions during the years that challenge our relationship, we are aware of that our friendship is unbreakable.
Reason 3
In addition, a friendship is likely and sound only between two people who are able to compete with each other. 【思路已明確,展開內容保密】
Conclusion:兩件大事:重申立場 + (籠統)總結全文(不分先后)
In conclusion, the competitive relationship does not diminish a friendship, as long as the two rivals do not resent but respect one another. The reasons, stated above, could not be clearer.
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