Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示例】 Encouraging a competitive atmosphere through exams or diverse competitions can equip children with essential skills to navigate future challenges, such as competing for places at prestigious universities or coveted job opportunities.
2. 文脈邏輯維度(Coherence and Cohesion) 在這個句子之后,寫作者可以考慮具體列舉哪些方面的能力能夠通過競爭得到提升,比如時間管理能力,獨立解決問題的能力。寫作者還可以強調競爭意識能夠激發動力,因為如果想要超越對手就需要更專注和更投入,這些能幫助孩子實現自己最大化的潛能(reach one’s full potential)。
4. 語法和句型維度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy) 本句的主語是encouraging a competitive atmosphere through exams or diverse competitions,注意encouraging是動名詞。本句的謂語動詞是can equip,后面的賓語是children,with引導的介詞短語提出了essential skills這一概念,后面to do是動詞不定式的用法,表達了這些技能的作用是應對未來的挑戰。such as后面列舉了具體的挑戰,包括競爭名校的入學機會,以及獲得夢寐以求的工作機會。需要注意such as的后面需要接名詞或者名詞短語,不能接句子。