支招小作文(143) | 動態柱 4種廢品回收比例
2024/1/5 16:18:13來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:支招小作文(143) | 動態柱 4種廢品回收比例
支招小作文(143) | 動態柱 4種廢品回收比例
分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對,最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。
[2023.5.20] The chart below shows the percentage of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.
【主體段思路分析】
分段方法1:按照主體對象分段(本篇文章采用此種他分段方法)
- glass+paper一段
- plastic+cans一段
分段方法2:按照時間分段
【開頭段】
The bar chart illustrates changes in the figures for four categories of domestic waste recycled in a city from 1992 to 2002.
【概述段】
Overall, there were improvements in the recycling of all the four types of waste. Most noticeably, the greatest change could be found in the proportion of recycled glass.
語言點提示:生活化表達
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in the initial year, only about 15% of glass was recycled. After 5 years, this figure more than doubled, followed by a remarkable growth to 48% in 2002. During the same period, the percentage of recycled paper also witnessed a constant climb, rising significantly from about 14% in 1992 to 38% in 2002.
思路要點:
- glass:急劇上升→小幅度上升
- paper:顯著上升
【Body 2】
It is clear that the figures for the other two kinds of waste were relatively lower in the 10-year period. Although the percentage of recycled cans ranked the top(18%) in the beginning, there was a slight fall in it by 3% in the subsequent 5 years, before rising markedly to 28% by the end of the period. By contrast, the figure for recycled plastic rose marginally to approximately 12% in 1997, after which the last 5 years saw a period of steadiness.
思路要點:
- 其余2種數值較低
- cans:第一年最高,隨后小幅度下降→顯著上升
- plastic:小幅度上升→保持平穩